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Nela's avatar

Not very fond of science fiction or fantasy personally, but themes of an imminent catastrophe looming over the story intrigued me a lot. Personally, the heavy exposition clouded the beginning portion even though I understand it's place and purpose. I would've preferred it had been spaced out but the story was well worth it. Great work!

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David's avatar

Thanks for reading!

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Beauhobbit's avatar

The recurring motif of Albania befuddles and humbles me

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Alex Picole's avatar

I had a similar idea about as in AI eventually breeding humans for its own needs, like a timeline of that happening, but this is much more entertaining, great job!

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David's avatar

Write it anyway! You definitely have a unique style, so I'll be there to read it!

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Owen Kagisano Bray's avatar

Really enjoyed the story. Loved the mix of technology, religious themes and African Mythology (I am biased since i grew up in Southern Africa :) ). And of course love twisted AI and reflections on Humanity itself

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David's avatar

Thank you so much for the kind words! I appreciate that very much. I really liked the idea of a dragon wanting to do good by humans.

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